(凤姐在美国的征婚广告原文）

I’m looking for a Husband now. I am the hottest star from China. My name is luoyufeng (罗玉凤)，chinese call me fengjie (凤姐)，born 1985. I want my husband very interested in political and Economic, he would like to Dominate the world.

I want my Husband like this:

1.    he must Between 25 to 31 years old.

2.    He will Between 5.74 feet to 6.11 feet height.

3.    He must never get married, no children.

4.    He will graduated from a prestigious world, like Harvard, Yale, MIT, West Point, Stanford, Oxon, and so so.

5.    He must has a master’s degree.

6.    He can’t been an Asian.

7.    He would better have a house and a car.

I’m born in a poor family in Chongqing. When 16, I come to a Inexpensive Normal school which I never liked. I read a lot of books Between 9 to 20.  I’m Expert in Poetry and prose. In 2006 when I’m 21, I became a Language teacher, in 2008 when I’m 23, I resigned and come to shanghai for a better future, but I can’t get a good job there. There was no way to get more income except publicize myself, so I became the hottest star in china in 2010 when I’m 25. I came to the USA in the same year. Since there is over 300,000 chinese man asked marry me but none of them suitable.

Notice:

1.    I’m only 4.82 feet height, but I used to wear a High-heeled shoes. So I always looked like 5.08 feet.

2.    I am from China which Country control Family Planning as their basal policy. I will Follow it, so I only want 2 children if get married.

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下面是同传届的一位人士免费帮忙凤姐修改的征婚启事，可以参阅，权当一种学习吧，哈哈。

Fengjie tones down her brazen requirements in her English ad due to her limited English.  Her personal ad is ridden with grammatical errors, poorly written and stinks of gold-digging. In the spirit of entertainment, I revised her personal ad.   I hope my revision will help her land the perfect husband. The revision is free of charge. If ever Fengjie finds a husband of her dreams, it would be nice for Fengjie and her husband to offer me a round-trip ticket to the US. I will attend the wedding and do some sight-seeing on the side. – Yvonne Liang

(免费帮凤姐修改了她的征婚广告。如果凤姐在美国找到如意郎君，一定要包来回机票，请我去美国参加婚礼，让我这个旅游控顺便游一下美国. 根据凤姐的原文，我帮她大大美化了一下她的征婚广告，她的英语实在是太烂，满纸语法错误，写得太赤裸裸，拜金，没内涵的。看我如何化腐朽为神奇 )

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